My colors are looking a little weird, idk if its how i saved it or what. I'll work on that.Also, theres a piece of orange in the "jump" that looks REAL awkward. I'm aware. Fixing it now, just not going to reupload :P
I dont think it looks akward It looks really nice, love the part when he jumps into the bush alot better from last week. Your really good doing this in photoshop, i been doing mine in storyboard geeesh let me tell ya little harder for me. I cant wait to see the finish
YAY thanks!yeah last week was just circles to represent him jumping. I'm glad it reads correctly :D
Looks great Monica! One thing though that I noticed and idk whether you'd want to fix it or not, but when the tiger is walking before he jumps into the bush...it might be nice if the background moved a bit with him you know? :o but yea looks pretty sweet I love it! Great job figuring out that tiger jump too! :D <3 Can't wait to see it all done!!!
YES. I agree with you. A flaw of Photoshop. I will be fixing this in Storyboard. THANKS FOR NOTICING THOUGH! It makes me happy when people notice the small stuff...is that weird?
It is awesome! It has very nice color choice and it clearly tells the story. It is so heartbreaking when I see the tiger loses its home. Your animatic is good! For me, I would fix two things. The first is not easy to figure what that is when I first see it. Show more of the person's eyes or face could be better. Secondly, I would adjust the timing where the woman seals the check and mails it out. Slows it down a little bit. It is too fast for viewers to figure out what is going on before she mails it.
gotcha thanks. I wanted to keep her super anonymous, to apply to any person...but i may have gone too far in the other direction. But I'll work on both of those things. thanks!
I really like the transitions in your piece, and when you get into storyboard pro don't loose the style of your animatic cause i think that style best suite this piece.(like the paperish style type stuff) good work ^__^
okay i'll try. Me and Storyboard pro have only met briefly before, with not so happy outcomes. But we shall meet again soon. MWUAHAHA! :D
I think it was a great idea how you started the transition with the bulldozer and then showed it on a bigger scale with the plane. it really gets the point across.
Great feedback from your peers! I'm sure you have already conducted an exhaustive search for tiger walk reference--the only thing your walk is missing is an extra key to show that the legs are moving forward (right now they are scissoring--or twining). Look at this reference: https://vimeo.com/4246875Also, watch your A/B screen space when the figure goes to her wallet and retrieves the money. The camera flips 180 degrees from her watching TV to getting the money. Look at this for help:http://purgetheory.blogspot.com/2012/03/storydesign-notes.html
POOP> i thought I had fixed the walk. I'll keep trying.And yes, I shall check that link out. Thanks :D
haha...according to this i do MOST things wrong with this animatic. bahaha. OH WELL. Learnin' learnin'. Anyways...I can try and come up with a way not to make her have a 180 degree turn :D thanks